So, yeah. No statistical formulas or anything. Just a general principle that I wanted to include as I wrote. I don’t plan on establishing any sort of ratios in the future, either, but lately I’ve done some small bit of unscientific analysis of my work and seen room for improvement on this score.
The exercise gave me a chance to tally up some numbers on that concern for inclusion, just to see how I’m doing for myself. I shared this with friends. I figured I’d share it here, too. These numbers, by the way, come mainly from me staring at my database and counting out loud. I don’t have fields for gender or ethnicity. I just try to keep track of that through names and by writing down physical descriptions when they appear (again, I wanted to keep things like hair color consistent).
To offer a quick but very important caveat: MANY names in these two books are only names thrown out a couple times over the course of the book. Things like ethnicity and gender are never really specified, and left open to interpretation. In my head, a lot of characters are of mixed-race backgrounds — it’s a couple hundred years in the future, after all — but if it’s not specified, I believe the default assumption many readers will make is that these are all white males, which I think is worth remembering when looking at the numbers.
Poor Man’s Fight has 138 named characters.
44 of those named characters are explicitly killed by book’s end.
7 more (named character) deaths are strongly implied, but not explicit.
18 named characters are (explicitly) women. Almost all of them speak and most play significant or major roles. PMF passes the Bechdel Test, though it could’ve done better there.
The cast includes only one named character whose homosexuality is explicitly referenced. The character is of great significance, while his sexuality is pretty much irrelevant to the story. This is by design — I wanted to establish that these things are not such huge issues in Tanner’s day as they are in current society, but it is also how I originally imagined that character. Nobody is a “token” representative of anything. 1 other major character (female) is hinted to be either bisexual or homosexual.
Only 2 characters (Gunny Janeka and Ravenell) are specified as black. Several others were black in my head but it’s not explicit in the text.
19 names are Hispanic (including Gomez and Other Gomez). Obviously there’s some potential crossover there between Latino and European Spanish, but in my head they’re overwhelmingly Latino.
18 names are East Asian.
5 names are South Asian (Indian, etc).
11 names are Arabic/Middle Eastern.
3 characters are known by nicknames without ethnic details, though easily inferred to be white males. (1 is Latino, actually, but I never made that explicit.)
…aaaand 74 names are presumptive white Europeans.
6 characters are straight-up Tuckers (people I actually know inserted into the book).
16 other characters are strongly based on people from my past, including the entire crew of St. Jude (minus the protagonist).
Rich Man’s War adds 111 named characters, bringing the total to 249.
30 characters who appeared in RMW are explicitly dead by book’s end, along with 6 deaths of characters who first appeared in PMF.
RMW has a far bigger body count in unnamed “on-screen” deaths, and then there are a couple little matters of planetary bombardments/invasions, but do those really count? J
Additions by gender and ethnicity:
RMW adds 15 women, along with giving a female face/identity to a character mentioned only by name in PMF. RMW passes Bechdel repeatedly.
Still only 1 (explicitly-noted) homosexual character, but he appears again in this book, along with the 1 strongly-hinted bisexual character from PMF. RMW also features a prominent bisexual male character, which becomes a point of conversation and an opportunity for the protagonist to stick his foot way, way down his own throat. Of all the books I’ve written, RMW places the least attention/relevance on sex and sexuality. No time for love, Dr. Jones!
Black characters: Both from PMF return in RMW to greater prominence. RMW introduces at least three characters whom I imagine as black but whom I left un-specified (Lt. Booker being the biggest example), but only one new character (not of those three) is specifically described as black (Capt. Bernard).
16 new names are Hispanic/Latino.
5 names are East Asian.
5 new names are South Asian.
1 name is Arabic/Middle Eastern.
9 characters are Tuckers (people I actually know whom I made into characters), though two are just name call-outs. There are 2 other semi-Tuckers, in that I cast them in my head as people I know, but changed either the first or last name because reasons.
So as for inclusion: There’s a definite downturn in overall numbers in RMW compared to PMF, but it’s masked in part by how many of the women, people of color and gay/bi characters return from PMF. This also doesn’t reflect the attention placed on those characters over the course of the narrative, which goes well beyond what those numbers show. Still, I definitely feel like I could do better.
Also, for what it’s worth, Tanner Malone himself isn’t entirely white European by descent, either. That’s something I’ve known from the beginning, but it hasn’t worked its way into the narrative yet.